Good quality animating
But the whole thing wasn't really that good. It was really short, and didn't really say anything as to why the mime did this so it didn't go down well if you ask me.
Good quality animating
But the whole thing wasn't really that good. It was really short, and didn't really say anything as to why the mime did this so it didn't go down well if you ask me.
Perfect.
Perfectly imperfect. As always, the childish looking graphics are displayed really well. I really like all of your work. It is different and always entertaining.
Really quite strange and really quite awesome.
Funny
That is really funny, I just watched all of the RE-UNdead episodes and thought they we're all pretty good. You can come up with some funny random stuff, but I don't think that the jokes were done as well as they could have. (But who am I to complain, I couldn't do half as good). I'm sure you'll get better at it though.
Voice acting was good.
Really good graphics
That looked really good, and went with the music reasonably well, but I prefer things that are engaging, that make you want to watch more. I'm sorry but this just wasn't engaging at all. What you need to do is make a really cool story or find someone else who has one then animate that. I think you could make a really good animation. Please keep trying.
That's reaaly good
if a bit boring.
In one word, it's "nice". 2 words, "very nice".
I think this would be awesome if you could make it one of the backgrounds for the Newgrounds Audio Portal. That's just something I kept thinking while watching it.
A BIT more exciting would make it better. But then again it would fit with the music so well.
It was just really nice. Make more.
it wasn't so good
It wasn't even funny pointless. It was just plain pointless. You need to have some sort of basis for making something. Also, more fps would be nice.
Animation was fine.
It didn't WOW me but it was fine. I think you made this very well but the story needed work. Slow dramatic scenes don't really work in a comedy... I hope you do make another. But a longer one with more to it.
Damn it.
After seeing the first 10 seconds I was hoping for a psychological thriller of some kind. Then after the next few seconds I wondered where it was going. Then when the credits came rolling by, I groaned and went and rated a 1/5.
That's not funny, that's not even sick. It was... nothing. It just didn't have any point. It wasn't entertaining in the slightest.
sounds like a personal problem
Not bad.
Not bad at all. I have a few small complaints: the buttons at the beginning weren't so good and the "story" was in a big chunk so I didn't really want to read it (try splitting it up, small sections are good)
Although, I would like to see it at double speed, and twice as long!
Keep working like this, and you will do well.
I don't know how that would raise my score to a 6 but, thanks anyway!
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