Foamy seems angrier than usual
It was a bit drawn out, but still pretty darn funny. Although the actual flash didn't have much to do with Zip Codes, more what the zip codes are used for.
Foamy seems angrier than usual
It was a bit drawn out, but still pretty darn funny. Although the actual flash didn't have much to do with Zip Codes, more what the zip codes are used for.
Putting aside the audio...
It looked like it was more of a "private joke" flash. It didn't make much sense, I mean I got the jokes... but... they just weren't very good jokes.
I think you should get yourself better backgrounds, the characters were ok-ish, but the background brought down the quality of the whole thing.
yeah im a lot better man i just work all day on a very serius project
It wasn't very good
Graphics, bad.
Animation, terrible.
Voice Acting, below average (I think).
Story; started badly, then actually seemed to have some point, which is the only reason your rating will be above .1/5.
Only 2 days, well, for an animation of that length, you worked very quickly, and it showed. If you just animated movements and spent more time on the graphics, you could have an ok flash.
ok, i will try
That was really good
There's nothing there that you have to apologize for crappiness of. It's all really good.
You are very good at animating in that style. Even though I noticed the minimal amount of different drawings, you used them very well and produced something very entertaining.
Not only bad animation
But bad audio. You really need to make sure that the right words are said, and in the right order.
If it's going to be all a lead up to one joke, then make sure that one joke can be heard. (If possible make the one joke better too)
Not only this, but it was not at all engaging. I know that this is hard, and I don't know how it's done, but when you get something engaging, then it doesn't matter so much on the graphics and such. The best example of something engaging, but not necessarily good looking is "Kevins Sixth Birthday".
I'm taking note of your sayings!
Anyway if you didn't understand the plot, it was all about a random crime in the street ;D, why such a terrible thing could happen.
The joke for me... there are several of'em... explaining'em spoils that but huh...
Blank moments, generation gap, the fact that they don't know each other... it must be part of my french humor lolz
Awesome
Although the backwards was a great effect, I really wanted to see it go forwards again at the end, in fast motion... I think that would have made it really really awesome... but you know, it was still really good...
The music was really good, the animation was also really good, the drawing was arty...
(I overuse "..." I know...)
This by itself is not all that good
If that is indeed your work (it seems too good to be true), I have to say, it will be freakin' awesome... with subtitles...
From the looks of it, the music, the voice acting, the story and more importantly the animation, all look like they will be very good... if they are uploaded in .swf format, or something without such low quality. If you are releasing it on Newgrounds, break it into parts, people shouldn't mind if it is good.
Since I didn't understand a word of that, and I'm sure more than 3/4 of the people on this website won't either, this can't be rated highly.
Although the plot was obvious, presented well
The music fitted very well with the animation (what little of it there was...). The story was very obvious. But the music and use of scene changes made it reasonably good.
Grammar errors: At the beginning, the mother said: "Kevin, go home!", when I think it was supposed to be "Kevin, come home!"
And one at the end, which I can't be bothered watching the whole thing again to remember. (It was the part where he said: "You promised you would never leave me" or something, just after that)
Excellent everything.
There's nothing to complain about in this flash. 'cept maybe for the ending...
Yeah, maybe a better storyline, but this is just great, I hope you make more. (Maybe add some ads on the front, I don't think anyone would mind)
Pretty interesting
All of the entries had their moments. Some were funny, some were intriguing, but the animation could be improved, and for a collab, it wasn't very long. Even if it was only a few people.
Overall, keep up the good work, and I hope to see more.
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