Multihunter's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[my sweet prince]

Yeah, nice animation

Didn't know what was happening, but it was some nice animation.
Maybe a nice story to go with it? (by "nice", I mean, a cheery, or warm sort of story)
Possibly even a little colour, or maybe you are happy with just the lines, I don't know, but I like colour. (Even if it's just a fill at the end)

The music fit with the nothing really happening thing, but I don't think it would work so well if you were going to actually make a story.

(Also, the showreel button does nothing for me)

wiilofgod responds:

ahh thanks for your comment man!!..yeahh the showreel button doesnt work :( but dont you worry , if you are still interested you can copy and paste the link :

http://cristianortiz-crom.blogspot.co m/2009/06/show-reel.html

hit me back with a comment or something , Im always glad to get feedback. Thank you!

[Sleepless Ep.1]

Incredible

Although the graphics could have been better, you actually made the whole thing flow in the same way throughout. The story was good.
I know others have said it; the spelling on the subtitles was a bit off. Also, the positions of the text were often a little bit off. I suggest making a text box, then copying and pasting into place, so it has a nice smooth standard.

Also: you should have put an ad on the front so that you could get money and then get a good microphone. The audio quality wasn't as good as it could have been.

Still, the story and action animation made up almost completely...

Sci-Fi responds:

thanks, but i have a pretty amazing mic. if there was problem with VO then it was with compression not the mic.and yeah, there was suppose to be an ad there.

[the big heads episode 3]

Putting aside the audio...

It looked like it was more of a "private joke" flash. It didn't make much sense, I mean I got the jokes... but... they just weren't very good jokes.

I think you should get yourself better backgrounds, the characters were ok-ish, but the background brought down the quality of the whole thing.

oldlyshapedchris responds:

yeah im a lot better man i just work all day on a very serius project

[flinkys 1]

It wasn't very good

Graphics, bad.
Animation, terrible.
Voice Acting, below average (I think).
Story; started badly, then actually seemed to have some point, which is the only reason your rating will be above .1/5.

Only 2 days, well, for an animation of that length, you worked very quickly, and it showed. If you just animated movements and spent more time on the graphics, you could have an ok flash.

diogoshx responds:

ok, i will try

[Random Street Crime]

Not only bad animation

But bad audio. You really need to make sure that the right words are said, and in the right order.

If it's going to be all a lead up to one joke, then make sure that one joke can be heard. (If possible make the one joke better too)

Not only this, but it was not at all engaging. I know that this is hard, and I don't know how it's done, but when you get something engaging, then it doesn't matter so much on the graphics and such. The best example of something engaging, but not necessarily good looking is "Kevins Sixth Birthday".

Adulcar responds:

I'm taking note of your sayings!
Anyway if you didn't understand the plot, it was all about a random crime in the street ;D, why such a terrible thing could happen.
The joke for me... there are several of'em... explaining'em spoils that but huh...
Blank moments, generation gap, the fact that they don't know each other... it must be part of my french humor lolz

[Robotic Octopus Snowman]

Damn it.

After seeing the first 10 seconds I was hoping for a psychological thriller of some kind. Then after the next few seconds I wondered where it was going. Then when the credits came rolling by, I groaned and went and rated a 1/5.

That's not funny, that's not even sick. It was... nothing. It just didn't have any point. It wasn't entertaining in the slightest.

ZekeySpaceyLizard responds:

sounds like a personal problem

[EX-Ken vs. Akuma]

Not bad.

Not bad at all. I have a few small complaints: the buttons at the beginning weren't so good and the "story" was in a big chunk so I didn't really want to read it (try splitting it up, small sections are good)

Although, I would like to see it at double speed, and twice as long!
Keep working like this, and you will do well.

azn-sk8er-dude responds:

I don't know how that would raise my score to a 6 but, thanks anyway!