Pretty good.
I would have liked it quite a bit more if it didn't spend nearly 2 minutes using almost the exact same bars of music before it got to the "random part". Which strangely made the whole thing more creepy.
Pretty good.
I would have liked it quite a bit more if it didn't spend nearly 2 minutes using almost the exact same bars of music before it got to the "random part". Which strangely made the whole thing more creepy.
I do the same beat too much, and I will work on it. Thank you for the review and advice.
Nice and eerie
Eerie music is always good, especially when it leads into some cool rhythm later in the song. This one didn't, and just stayed the same for 1:29 seconds. Seems a little pointless to me.
If you want, i'll send you the full 15 minutes, when you listen to it, somehow it stimulates a part of your brain to make you actually feel like you are out of it...
nice and creepy
But it just isn't entertaining...much...
It's background music, so it works, as long as you get the feel for it. It really shouldn't be entertaining.
Could have been better
If you took out the part where you suddenly turned it into a deep thud thud noise at 2:51
Or at least make it less obtrusive to the rest of the song.
Otherwise the song is good and fits with the title.
Yeah, that "thud-thud" sound is annoying, can't change it, made it about 8 years ago :)
At nearly 4:00...
There really was no reason to listen to all of it. If you halved the length of everything in this song then you probably would get a higher score.
Other than that: Nice! Maybe more interesting next time though?
Good. But...
It starts off very good, but it gets a little boring after about 30 seconds...
My suggestions are to get more instruments or make a more interesting tune with the ones you have and maybe at about 1:20 make the percussion a little louder.
(I don't give out 10's very easily...)
yeah, you can see it as a rather long intro, but I am thinking of giving atleast one melody change before it blasts, but its still unfinished. Thanks for the review :)
Good but..
I thought some of the notes at 0:49-0:50 sounded quite off... maybe try using a slightly lower piano (Or what ever is at the front at the start) key. So maybe 1 - 2 semitones, whichever fits...
Other than that it sounded pretty darn good!
Thanks for the suggestion. I'll keep that in mind while I work on it some more.
Good... but...
I don't really think it sounds like its for sonic... it sounds more like it should be in a puzzle game like Bejewelled to me. It would make good thinking Music...
I'm sorry but this music sounds more like preperation for a battle then thinking to me
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