Really good art and music and very polished.
If it was actually anything at all, I probably would have rated 5 stars, easy.
I really loved the credits, though. Some really funny lines mixed up in the boring ones.
Creepy and enthralling
Few things that are very random manage to keep interest like your work. I don't know how you do it! You KNOW that something weird and unexpected is going to happen, and yet you still feel like; "wow, didn't see that coming".
I think it's the good mix of childish looking drawings, ambient background music, creepy voicing and the knowledge that something from the unknown will happen next.
I can't tell if Salad Fingers is crazy, or the actual world around him is that messed up.
I can't tell if this has a deeper meaning, or is just interestingly creepy...
I can tell that it's brilliant.
Linking Geometry with Spirituality
It was spoken really well. The animation was smooth, but the graphics had some nasty edges in a few places. It was all still smooth, stylish and well put together. The music fit, and it gave the feel of a fun lecture.
Is this production in any way influenced by "Extra Credits"?
Just a few things I want to point out;
Crop circles are a relatively new thing. They certainly weren't around in the days when basic geometry was first being explored. I'm not even sure if they had proper crops or any way to actually look at the shapes made. Certainly no reason to believe in aliens..
A spiritual explanation of geometry was given only by the people who first found it because they themselves believed in the soul and that everything was created by some form of divine being, etc. It doesn't mean it's true.
The information we have obtained isn't from the actual image, it's from the fact that they are perfect circles. Circles are the basis of pretty much all geometry, and it's not because of a spirit in a void, it's because every point on the circle is the same distance away from the centre. That it builds up the entire universe is because we've made rules off of it to explain nature, not because of the spirit. (In my eyes at least)
No matter what you believe in, though it was interesting...
...what is this?
I'm not so happy with this.
Including a story with your animations is fine, if the story... you know... tells a story...
You told more and better stories without words. Pure facial expressions and music is all you needed before. It was good like that.
Maybe you're sick of it, so I apologise, but we haven't seen much on here. (I don't know spanish, so what I know of this "CCC world" is what has been shown on Newgrounds animations, and that's not much. I want more.)
This is lacking your usual interesting design.
It's lacking your expression, your feeling that you could show with so basic lines. You don't have the nicest looking art. Not by a long shot. But your older animations showed... "freedom".
It's lacking freedom.
It's just lacking all round.
PS. I criticize those I like the most...
Any chance of a link?
This. was. beautiful.
I remember seeing the trailer for this ages ago, I honestly thought it was a trailer that was in themselves a movie, and there wouldn't actually be any movie. I am glad I was wrong. This had an awesome story, told brilliantly. The animation/graphics of some parts could have been better (mostly it was the shaky lines) but I really should NOT complain since it was altogether such an awesome piece.
Also, any chance of a link to an uncompressed version?
I don't know much history
So, along with the song, it was hard to tell what the animation was referring to.
As a flash movie, it was alright. Didn't make much sense, but was alright. Your drawings could have been better, but the flow of the whole thing (which was greatly helped along by the song) was the redeeming factor there.
I kept thinking, though, this doesn't show that you have any knowledge of history, but that you can draw what lyrics of a song are saying. I don't see how that's going to get you a high mark...
Not the best visuals I've ever seen
But that was pretty much one of the best animations I've ever seen.
Voice acting; great,
Music; well suited
Animation/Graphics; Imperfect, but didn't really matter that much, as the presentation of the whole thing was so well done!
Really good graphics
The animation needed a little work, and, yes the sound wasn't the best it could have been, but this shows a lot of promise.
Maybe if you worked together with a voice actor or something ('cause they probably have a good mic) and work on the story (or jokes) a bit more for each episode you would have a really really good series!
Yeah, nice animation
Didn't know what was happening, but it was some nice animation.
Maybe a nice story to go with it? (by "nice", I mean, a cheery, or warm sort of story)
Possibly even a little colour, or maybe you are happy with just the lines, I don't know, but I like colour. (Even if it's just a fill at the end)
The music fit with the nothing really happening thing, but I don't think it would work so well if you were going to actually make a story.
(Also, the showreel button does nothing for me)
ahh thanks for your comment man!!..yeahh the showreel button doesnt work :( but dont you worry , if you are still interested you can copy and paste the link :
hit me back with a comment or something , Im always glad to get feedback. Thank you!
Although the graphics could have been better, you actually made the whole thing flow in the same way throughout. The story was good.
I know others have said it; the spelling on the subtitles was a bit off. Also, the positions of the text were often a little bit off. I suggest making a text box, then copying and pasting into place, so it has a nice smooth standard.
Also: you should have put an ad on the front so that you could get money and then get a good microphone. The audio quality wasn't as good as it could have been.
Still, the story and action animation made up almost completely...
thanks, but i have a pretty amazing mic. if there was problem with VO then it was with compression not the mic.and yeah, there was suppose to be an ad there.
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